Monday, December 13, 2010

What is Plogiorism? Examples

1. Borrowing someone's homework: Some people want to borrow your homework because they want it for reference or he/she doesn't understand what it means and need someone's homework to apprehend it. If I am a person that is borrowed by him/her, I will lend him/her because I trust him/her he/she won't copy this. After I understand that he/she tries to copy my work, I won't borrow my homework to anyone in the future, and everything should be done by yourself.

2. Cheating in the class during the test: Why we have a test? Because teachers want to know that what we have learned before and what did we get so far. However, some students will cheat because they don't know how to write and they are too lazy to think. Although you get a high grade when you cheat, your level is still low and you won't get any efforts. That's why cheating during the test is not avaliable and not good for you.

Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Quick Write - Most Cherished Possession

If you could save just one item from a disaster-a fire, a flood, an earthquake-what would it be? In a few sentences, describe your most cherished possession and tell why you treasure it. Was it a gift? If so, how does that make it especially important to you?

If I could save one item from a disaster such as a fire, flood, or earthquake, I will use this possession to save more people. If the poor people need money or they want to eat some food, I will cherish possession that has remained before to give them what they need. After that, my most cherished possession is money. Not only I can use money to buy anything I want, but also use the rest of money to save needed people. I think this is a gift for me because money can buy anything you want. However, this gift also includes other people who need help because I want these people to be full of happiness. That's why this is especially important for me.

Monday, December 6, 2010

Quick Write - Irony

Definition: The use of words that say the opposite of what you really mean.



The sign with bird and delect-marked shows there, but there is a bird just stand above the sign.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

The American Dream

Almost everyone in PAS has to go to colleges in America, and that also includes me. However, maybe your future and goal are come from the America, your achievement and hard-working will be seen in there, too. That's why everyone in PAS should have your own American dream because it depends on your future and further hope.

My American dream is to watch baseball and basketball games, see some movie stars in Hollyhood, and go to good college. I think this is enough for me because too much dreams will get a lot of strains to reach the goal. I like baseball and basketball game a lot, and also I like to watch movie with lots of movie star in it. The first way to reach the goal is to get a high grade from SAT and go to good college in Los Angles, which has my favorite team, Lakers and Dodgers. If you don't get a high grade and go to bad college, you don't have a comfortable and good mood to watch these games. Not only this, Los Angles is near to Hollyhood, I could go there conveniently. Not only could I see the beautiful senery, but also could see some famous movie stars. Before enjoying the games and movie stars, I should be worried about that which college is really appropriate for me. I need to study hard and get a high grade.

Monday, November 29, 2010

School Comparison

Compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of going to a school like PAS versus going to local school.

Advantages in PAS and local school are not same. PAS has some advantages for me because we have more holiday than in local school, such as PD day, Christmas break and spring break. These holidays never happen in local school. That means we have a lot of freedom in PAS. Another good thing in PAS is no uniform every school day. advantages in local school is that every class' period is short, only fifty minutes. That means we don't have to seat on the chair too long.

Disadvantage in PAS and local school are different, too. Disadvantages in PAS is having a lot of homework and facing second language. It's difficult for me because we do the homework without Chinese.             How about the disadvantages in local school? We have to wear the uniform and your body should be clean and tidy. That's really strict. All students want to wear any clothes that they want, we don't want to wear it every single day.

Sunday, November 28, 2010

Sherlock Helmes

Dialogue:

three men live in this house which was surrounded by forest. One night, one of the man was killed.

Policeman A: We found the body in his house, he was died and lied on his bed and blood was all over his face.
Policeman B: I think his throat has a hole, may be skiller used knife to sting the throat.
Policeman C: But this room was locked, no one could go in.
Policeman A: Actually, there is a spiracle in front of the body and bed.
Policeman C: the most terrible thing is the mask was thrown everywhere.
Policeman B: I think killer went through the spiracle and then made a terrible apperance to show that he was cursed by legend.

After Sherlock Helmes heard what the policeman said, he began searching this surroundings to find any clues. during this period, He found something.......

Sherlock Helmes thought: Why there is only one mask has covered blood and rest of masks are clean?

He didn't believe any legend, the killer must use brillient method to kill him. He believed the killer is one of two men.

Policeman B: There is another clue, that is rope. But how the killer went into it?
Sherlock Helmes: Maybe the killer never went into it, that guy might kill him from outside.
Policeman C: It's impossible!!!!! Because the spiracle to the bed's distance is far.

Sherlock Helmes ignored him, he just concentrated on this event.

Sherlock Helmes thought: the mask filled with blood might close to the throat, I think the knife was located in mask's mouth.
Policeman A: How about the rope and rest of the masks?
Sherlock Helmes: Maybe the killer used all of the masks to go through the rope one-by-one then passed through the spiracle, the mask with the knife must be front. After that, the killer pulled the rope and let all mask become straight, the knife would close the man's throat.

Policeman C: But it was just close, it didn't sting into it.
Sherlock Helmes: the killer could use his hand to push it then killed him, idiot.
Policeman A: Wow!!!!!! Brillient inference!!!!! But who is the killer?

Two men look nervous and strange. When Sherlock Helmes frisked two men, he noticed that why this man's hand, with glasses, has a little incised wound......

Saturday, November 27, 2010

the newspaper news(11/27/2010) - (NBA news)Williams Scores 29 to Beat Lakers

SALT LAKE CITY (AP) — Deron Williams scored 29 points and Andrei Kirilenko grabbed two key rebounds late as the Utah Jazz rallied from a 19-point first-half deficit for a 102-96 win over a Los Angeles Lakers team that swept them out of the playoffs last season.
Williams tied the score at 96 with 1:16 remaining on a 3-pointer, then stole the ball and passed to Raja Bell for what proved to be the game-winner.
Ron Artest and Paul Gasol both missed shots late for the Lakers (13-3), which saw their five-game winning streak end.
The Jazz won their fourth straight to improve to 12-5.
Kobe Bryant scored 14 straight points for the Lakers in a 2:25 span late in the fourth quarter as the Lakers rallied from an 83-82 deficit to take a 96-91 lead with 2:12 remaining.
But Williams, who Bryant called the best point guard in the league before the game, took over.
He was just 5 of 15 at one point before finishing with a game-high 31 points on 10-of-21 shooting.
Al Jefferson added 20 points and eight rebounds in holding his own against the Lakers' Pau Gasol (21 points, 11 rebounds).
Utah's other guards got the Jazz back in the game when it looked like they were finished.
The second quarter belonged to the two shortest players on the court. Utah's Ronnie Price and Earl Watson, at 6-foot-2 and 6-1, respectively, ignited an 11-0 run to pull the Jazz to 39-22 after Los Angeles had taken a 19-point lead.
Price started the run with a running one-handed slam on a pass from Watson. Watson and Price then hit back-to-back 3-pointers and Paul Millsap followed with a three-point-play off a nice pass underneath from Watson. Watson then took it the length of the court to pull Utah to 39-32 with 6:08 remaining.
Then it was Williams' turn. He hit a 3-pointer and a fastbreak layup over Lamar Odom to pull Utah to 44-42 with 3:09 left in the first half.
Millsap, on an assist from Williams, gave Utah its first lead, 46-45, on a short jumper with 1:48 left in the first half.
The Lakers took a 50-46 lead into halftime as Gasol and Bryant combined for the next five points.
Los Angeles, after shooting 68.4 percent in the first quarter, made just 4 of 21 in the second quarter (19 percent) as Utah closed the gap.
(This version CORRECTS Jazz 102, Lakers 96. Corrects Utah win streak to 4 straight games.)

Summary: This is a play involving much singing and action at that night, because of the competition between two sport stars: Kobe Bryant and Deron Willians. Jazz performed win over Lakers 102 - 96 at that night, the key exactly was Willians because he got 29 points. However, Bryant got 31 points and it is higher than Willians but still lost this game because Ron Artest and Pau Gasol both missed shots in last minute and Willains got important three points when this game closed the end. these two events let Jazz win this brilliant game. Actually, Jazz was fall behind Lakers into halftime, and then Willians led Jazz to be in the lead in last minute. After this game, Lakers' five-game winning streak end and Jazz win streak to 4 straight games.


Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Vengeance

If someone want to revenge to another person, they might use different kinds of methods to do it. If someone killed your relative people who are important to your life, you will revenge to him/her and make him/her die painfully and slowly. Such as a movie called "Saw", you can see from this movie. people in this film are all painfully and slowly died by many different mechanism. You can use one of the mechanism to kill someone who has killed your important person. When that person are painful, you can be cheerful in front of him/her.

Monday, November 15, 2010

What is plagiarism?

Plagiarism is to take someone’s work or ideas without doing yourself. Plagiarism also same as cheating, this event would happen from students. When you don’t study or do your homework, you might borrow someone’s homework to copy or use any methods to cheat in the class. That means this guy is lazy and wants to get higher grade. For another example: If you do a project without doing on your own, everyone will say that you are not creative or no ability to do anything. You won’t get any award and encouragement from other people. These situations are called “plagiarism”.

Why People Write Diaries

People write journals and in diaries because they want to record the traveling route that they have gone before. Some famous people write diaries because they are interested in noting things they have. Not only this, they might find some unusual and special things, and they want to share with us. One of the famous people who wrote journals is Lewis Carroll. He has written lots of diaries before, and these diaries are for 1858 – 1862. These diaries make people want to read them because they might want to know the author’s experience and feeling. If the author thinks something is good, people will want to go there to see.

Sunday, November 14, 2010

chapter 5 response

I think the author want to talk more about the pearl's bad things. Kino and Juana want to find the method to escape to another place with pearl and they don't want any bad things to happen again. From the previous chapter, we can see that when the pearl is in Kino's hand, the bad things are coming quickly. Such as Kino fights with other people, the house is burned, or the canoe has the hole that make water in. I think those things happen because of the pearl's appearance. If Kino lives without the pearl, he will have a better and peaceful life.

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

5 questions about term 1 in ESL2

What would you change about what you do to be more successful this time around?

After the midterm was finished, I would change about I need to study hard more and pay attention in the class. I think these are enough to be successful for me and these are only way to get a high grade.

What course material did you like or not like?

I liked participating to other students because we could share each opinion and suggestion together and learn some communication skill between each other. I think these are very important for me.

What was your favorite activity?

My favorite activity was to play game. One thing we guys play was about vocabulary competition. We separated into three groups, and then compete to each other. Teacher would say a word meaning and we had to guess or know what that word was. If someone knew this word, that guy could stand in front of whiteboard then wrote down the word you thought. If you corrected, your group would get one point. This game was really fun for me.

What did you like the least?

I liked writing essays the least because I didn’t like to write essays and it was really troublesome and boring. I thought this was my problem because I was too lazy to write things. However, I couldn’t blame teacher because he wanted us to improve our writing skills.

What’s one thing that you would like to see in your English classes?

One thing that I would like to see in my English classes is to participate more with other classmates because not only it is fun, but also I like to hear anybody’s suggestion and thinking.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

twenty questions about careers

Questions:

1. Why do you want to choose this job?
2. What kind of training do you get for this job?
3. How do you feel for this job?
4. Do you enjoy this job? Why?
5. Is the job difficult for you? Why?
6. Which level is your job?
7. How often do you do this job?
8. How many mates with you to do this job?
9. What kind of job do you take?
10. Do you get any efforts for this job?
11. Do you get any unfavourable situation for this job?
12. If you get any unfavouable situation for this job, how will you solve them?
13. If you get any efforts for this job, how will you celebrate with them?
14. Who suggests the job that you take?
15. How big is your company?
16. Will you share your efforts for your job? How?
17. Are you fun with working with mates? Why?
18. Do you learn something for this job? Why?
19. If you do this job at the long time, what kind of things you want to improve?
20. are you interested in this job? Why?

Monday, November 1, 2010

discuss the effects of studying hard for a test

Why do we have tests? Because teachers want to know whether we study for subjects or not. If you don't understand the test's content and questions, you might fail this test or get a lower grade. That's why we have to study hard and ask more questions about the test. Studying hard for a test not only can help students get higher grade, but you can also learn new skills into your brain. That can make you feel smart. If you get a high grade, you can be proud of yourself, and then your parents will be proud of you, too. That can make you feel happy and satisfied. These are the effects of studying hard for a test.However, you have to spend more time studying than the other students. When your classmates are playing, you should use this time to study for the test, because time is money. After that, you have to make a schedule that which moment you want to study, that can make you feel convenient to prepare the test. If you can follow these steps, I hope you can have a good grade directly.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

the breathing process in the human body

Breathing is very important for the human body. If you can't breathe, you will die soon. First, you have to open your month to let oxygen flow into your body. the oxygen will go to your lungs. Then, when you give out breath, you have to let carbon dioxide out to your month and then you complete your steps of breathing. However, when you do some exercises or any intense activities, your condition of breathing will become fast because you have a lot of carbon dioxide in your lungs, you need to get it out quickly. I hope everyone can have a normal respiratory system and your lungs are always health without carbon dioxide. That's why breathing is very important for me.

Monday, October 18, 2010

Explain briefly how to do your favorite activity?

My favorite activity is watching movies. However, I have own method to do this activity and I always plan it before I do this activity. First, I invite some best friends who are boys and girls to go to watch movie with me. Next, when I make sure that how many people will go to watch movie with me, I will go to buy the tickets in the cinema. After that, I have to tell them which place should we meet together and then go to the cinema. Finally, we can chat together, buy some drinks together, and enjoy the film together. I think it is the best way to do my favorite activity and I can have a lot of fun with friends.

Saturday, October 16, 2010

A Gift

Something that is not expectable and unwanted may become a gift, and this gift sometimes changes our life. I remembered that was almost five years ago as I was my birthday. Five years ago, I was disagreeable to read books, and when I read the beginning of the sentence, I was going to fall asleep. Because reading books were boring for me, I refused to do that. However, this situation would change when I knew him who was cram school’s head. I was in cram school to study Chinese, because I was bad at writing a composition, I had to read more books to get some knowledge. After a half semester later at cram school, I left it. Before that, he gave me a book and that day was just my birthday. He thought that he knew my birthday because I saw that was covered by the wrapper as a gift. My mood was excited but disappointed soon, because it was a book. I understood this was his good intention; I should touch it by myself. When I read it on first page at home, I was interested in this book. Because I liked adventureful things, I was attractive to it. I started reading again and again, I really appreciated him because I learned a lot of stuff from there and I was joyful. After this event, I improved my writing skill a lot, and I started reading books about adventure very often. All my life, this is my best gift I have never had.

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

response to the pearl - chapter 4

This chapter talks about selling the pearl's process. After finishing reading this chapter, I felt that Kino was destroyed by himself and this pearl really let Kino become more dangerous. After Kino was associated with the dealer, the dealer didn't think the pearl was really worth, but the dealer gave him a thousand pesos.  In fact, the neighbor didn't argue about the money, but Kino still want the dealer to pay fifty thousand pesos. The end of this chapter, Kino's surrounding was strange and terrible, I felt the evil was coming closely to him. I think Kino didn't just want to care about Coyotito, he might also want to live with the rest of money. I guess that Kino would die with the pearl.

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Put yourself in Kino's shoes. How would you react when the doctor came to your door after you found the pearl?

If I was in Kino's shoes, I would tell him that you needed to clean up first. Becasue I was afraid of him had a disease from his foot, I needed the shoes become clean.

After I found the pearl, I would collect it. Because it was valuable and worth, I didn't want to give anyone the pearl. If the doctor came to my door and knock it, I wouldn't open the door and escape him. If I was Kino, I would prepare the tools which was knife and gun, etc. Because the doctor was evil and mean, I had to bring these stuff to against him if it was necessary. If the doctor was more stronger than me, I would stop to against him then escape from the window with the pearl which I found. Both these methods wouldn't let me lose it and no more losses.

Monday, October 4, 2010

response to the pearl - chapter 3

In this chapter, the author thinks that the pearl is equal to hope for the future, and this pearl will let Kino and Juana provide for Coyotito and give him a better life. The discovery of the pearl causes a clear change in the villagers' reactions to Kino and Juana, and it gives Kino great importance. The behavior of the doctor foreshadows great disaster that Kino and Juana should meet with, which the author shows through the no-name thief who attempts to steal the pearl that night. However, I think the author also foreshadows the trouble that Kino would find with pearl buyers. In the description of the pearl buyers, although they are many of them, they are actually only one. The pearl buyers symbolize the mainly outstanding person of La Paz who can exploit Kino.

I wish that I could...

I wish that I could improve my English. English is my second language to learn, and also it is the language that every country would communicate each other. I have to improve my writing skill and speaking in English, so two things I should improve them are speaking more and writing more any time. I need to use unique words to write an essay and don't use simple words. Not only can improve my essay writing, but also can learn some new words from dictionary. And then Speaking English is more challange for me, so I need to speak English with classmates and teachers very often, that can improve my pronunciation, too. That's why I wish I could improve my English.

Sunday, October 3, 2010

response to the pearl - chapter 1 and 2

Chapter 1:

I think although Kino and Juana are represented the larger community that they live, this community becomes the important development of the story. It introduces their village a lot and the village takes on its own character. However, the particular show is when Kino and Juana visit the doctor and their neighbors follow in a near procession. The idea of community is also important for various songs which Kino remembers; Kino remembers two songs in this chapter, the Song of the Family and the Song of Evil, may be this story is a fable which defines between good and evil. In this chapter, I think the doctor represents social system that places a value of money in human life, and this shows which obstacles that Kino and Juana face. Between the doctor and Kino are important role to play the doctor refusal to treat Coyotito. Therefore, this presents an adversity that Kino and Juana should suffer.

Chapter 2:

Because the author still talks about the extremely poverty that Kino and Juana live, they can’t do an own canoe and Kino has to perform his job as a peal diver, they must use a canoe that is very old. I think pearl diving is represented an act of desperation and describes Kino’s poverty. Nevertheless, Kino realizes that he has found an impressive pearl when he finds the oyster during the diving. When he realizes the important pearl he has found, he is expected and tensional. In this chapter, this event provides a great hope for Kino and Juana. However, discovering the pearl is difficult that may occur, and the pearl causes Kino to become a brave man and revert to innate behavior, this change will have dangerous consequence.

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

How can playing game teach you about life?

Although Playing game is not good for student, it also can teach you about life. Life is colorful and plentiful actually; some games’ contents are good for people to think about life. Such as strategy and puzzle game, they are the good example to show the life. If you don’t like to know the knowledge with books, you can play puzzle game on the internet and use game’s way to realize them. That means you learn something with happiness and fun that will change your life become better. That’s why playing game can make your life more meaningful.

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

the first time to breed animal

The first time to breed animal is almost five years ago, and my family and I bred some fish at home. My family has mom, dad, younger sister, and I, and they wanted to accompany animals afterwards, so and I. we thought that we could have a lot of fun with animals, and every hour and moment to play with them. Although we knew that feeding and cleaning animals are troublesome and boring, we still could enjoy them on the free time without any pressure.

In such a month, and on such a day, my family and I want to pet store to buy some fish. My mom decided to buy fish because she thought fish is easy to breed and we didn’t have to clean it with lots of energy. My dad, sister and I agreed with that statement. We went into the store as soon as we saw a lot of fish swimming in the fishbowl. It’s amazing and surprising, and then we started finding fish that we wanted. Finally, I found the fish which color was blue and yellow, its body is small and long, and its color had a little gloss on its body. Because of its beautiful shape and color, I suggested them to buy three these kinds of fishes, and they agreed. After that, we happily brought them and buy some stuff of fish to home.

When we arrived at home, we started to manage about fish’s house. We had fishbowl, water, decoration (rocks, waterweeds, etc.), lamplight, and filter unit, etc. Although we only spent this time almost one hour, we still tired in this process. After finishing it, we put fish into the fishbowl, and then we watched the fish swimming inside the fishbowl together. We were relaxed and comfortable to watch it, it was attractive.

However, we really didn’t know how to breed fish actually, we just knew to feed them and clean it. Few weeks later, all fish were died and came to the top. And then we guessed that the fish’s age was too short or we didn’t do well on this stuff. They didn’t know how it happened, either and I. After knowing this event, we had to put them to the trash and also missed them because we didn’t have accompanying animals anymore. Although we had a hard time and felt bad, we could remember that we accompany them with happiness and fun when the fish still lived in the fishbowl. That would my unforgettable memory with these cute creature.